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vandana
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0 posted 2005-03-06 05:05 PM


When I think of you,
I think of the times,
The times we used to spend
The times we used to say,
The way we used to be
Together,
I think of a morning dawn,
And a warm sun,
I want to run to you,
I think of you
Let the days go by,
And the ways of your smile
Smiling back through
Loving years,
I think of you,
Sometimes,
When you are not here with me,
I held my arms around me,
Think of the dream
You and I together,
Life sometimes,
Realise the time between love and space,
I know,
You are away from me,
But then,
Your memory still on my mind,
Wishing the time would run fast,
Now the time would let my heart
Stay at the past,
I think of you,
I lay on my bed,
And I think of your smile,
Smiling back at me,
I think of you,
Day and night,
I think of you,
I smiled at those memories,
Of us,
When I think of you,
I realise,
How much I have missed you
When I think of you,
I think of you only.....


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Grover
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1 posted 2005-03-06 05:37 PM


Wow.. lots of intense emotion.
SEA
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with you
2 posted 2005-03-06 06:56 PM


you keep getting better and better every time i read you...can relate to this
Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-03-06 07:10 PM


touching - filled with a wistful wishing -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-03-06 07:40 PM


liked this one
Sadelite
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5 posted 2005-03-06 07:42 PM


vandana,
   lovely passionate writing;
   I've always enjoyed your writing, and have seen much growth in the last year and a half since I've been here.  
   You write so delicately, but with power.

           ~sadie

saved_by_grace
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In the arms of God...
6 posted 2005-03-06 08:26 PM


Dang...this one made me cry!!!  VERY BEAUTIFUL...thank you for posting this one.

Hugs

Becka

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-03-07 11:05 PM


Enjoyed...James
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