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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Started to show emotion enter good and evil did so well without them tampered on a large scale sorted through the photos never a chance to do it again there were the wedding ones then the adoption day cause somebody couldn't deliver. Started to show emotion one on the couch good and evil hover phone rings one wouldn't expect anything operation matchmaker enacts picture book calls from shelf scene continues, album peeled open not to forget one with holiday pictures but somebody wants you to meet somebody else outside the confines of the picture contained within the book cover a presence lies deep in the pages there's another lover to meet besides those framed in picture corners the phone rings one goes on to see, ad infinitum. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-07-2005 12:59 AM).] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
dont know exacty how to respond to this touches many emotions  My spirit will rise |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Good poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...*sigh* |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I'm like MGroves, unknowing what to say... Ouch comes to mind. I can imagine thumbing through the photos... sadie |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
added a concluding stanza, thanks for sharing |
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