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David2
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0 posted 2005-03-06 11:44 AM



Forever My Love

Fall leaves of red and brown must surely die,
While silver Christmas snow too soon will melt.
When beauty’s lost so tenderly we cry,
Forlorn from loss of glee and gladness felt.
Our days of youth so swiftly slip away,
While memories of what once was sustain.
A golden sunrise ushers in each day,
Then slowly fades till only night remains.
If you must go I’ll miss each morning’s dawn,
That brought some chance of gazing on your face.
To be with you I gladly played love’s pawn,
And purchased joy that time may ne’er erase.

Your love provides me peace to never ease,
As constant as the summer’s softest breeze.

© Copyright 2005 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-06 11:50 AM


This is a beautiful write David2,
full of all the seasons, changes and by far great promise of an endless summer.
TD

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2 posted 2005-03-06 02:26 PM


  

awesome~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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3 posted 2005-03-06 08:20 PM


WOW...very nice, David!     Thanks for sharing! -- Becka
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4 posted 2005-03-06 08:24 PM


how beautiful
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5 posted 2005-03-06 08:27 PM


David2,
  I'm glad I stopped by.  Your poem has special meaning for me.  

   You write well.

         sadie

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6 posted 2005-03-07 12:09 PM


Perfection.
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7 posted 2005-03-07 12:12 PM


this is SO beautiful!
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8 posted 2005-03-07 04:51 AM


Beautiful words and emotions~

~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


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9 posted 2005-03-07 07:56 AM


simply caring and thoughtful love speaks with rose colored voice
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