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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2005-03-06 09:12 AM



Tone and nuance glide reaction
Sun to shade the eyes refraction
Gone and stayed converse above it
Tree to blade relate in covet

My heart hears stir of boundless sound
The march of wind chimes tremble ‘round
And all this time in glove I hold
The fragile arts of tin turned gold

Undone and ribboned sky born theme
Pressed flat and trim a lofty dream
Unstarched and clean made soft by beam
Hung out in winds of morning cream

Alas the peaceful snows rescind
Though thoughts of you remain undimmed
Hearts overflow my arms to hold
The fragile arts of tin turned gold

Copyright Kkh 03/06/05

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-03-06 09:29 AM


I do love it when you rhyme
Sadelite
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2 posted 2005-03-06 09:38 AM


Beautiful flow of sound and word!  Eloquently written!
                     ~sadie~

Magnus
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3 posted 2005-03-06 10:18 AM


You are the bearer of a gift,  and thankfully,
you share this with each of us.  

Well done dear K.  

MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-03-06 09:54 PM


beautiful

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2005-03-06 11:30 PM


a lovely art it is
framed and ready to be admired

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-03-07 11:31 PM


Very nice...James
jwesley
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7 posted 2005-03-08 09:38 PM


ahh...always enjoy reading you, my friend. N

jimmy


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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
8 posted 2005-03-08 11:01 PM


full, flowing, gentle...very nice
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