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Estuaries
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Estuaries An estuary wends its way Down into, my memories lay Babbling, spilling on to shore Where all my fantasies would store Draining down into the land Where heat and sun turns it to sand Where spills the time of hours glass That changes into past alas The beach has turned to pink array That makes the rainbows of my day Growing treasures fantasy Salted down with ecstasy And I do mine this cave of gold Within a sleuth box made of old Pick the gleaming bobbles out And plant them in my mind to sprout And when the plant comes into bloom I weave it in my night time loom |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
And I do mine this cave of gold Within a sleuth box made of old Pick the gleaming bobbles out And plant them in my mind to sprout And when the plant comes into bloom I weave it in my night time loom ....and all of us are the lucky recipients of your minds blossoms. Thankyou for this treasure piece Seymour. Into my library it goes! hugs, Chris Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a scene here! wow...what a morning! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ GORGEOUS read-aloud piece~ Thank you for this Sunday morning treat~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
And when the plant comes into bloom I weave it in my night time loom Definitely lines to weave rhyme to our daily tune (You've set the tune for my day...Thanks, Sy! ~sadie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, You are a treasure, thank you  passing, Have a wonderful morning. Marge, You are a sweet heart. Hugs back Sadelite Have the best of days and thank you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chris and I are enjoying the same passage... I had a pink-tinged morning here as well, Sy, just no ocean to hear my sigh.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Then I will share mine. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I love the concept of mining thoughts and memories..but your opening verse just knocked me flat! BRAVO! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox I thank you for the Bravo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks for the smile  and to you I send a hug  enjoyed: My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES I'll take both, smile and hug. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Where spills the time of hours glass That changes into past alas This one's going into my library, dear friend... for I love the entirety of it... and these lines... simply wonderful! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you so much. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Good concept and metaphor, See More.... Well done, as usual. ___________ice/ford ><> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice A nice warm comment, thank you. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You see with such wonder....love it! |
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