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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2005-03-05 08:12 PM

When you're moved by a youthful love
Your spirit can't help dancing
Something floats down from above
A magic spell made for romancing
When you hear the thunder of your heart
You can't avoid anticipation
When the storm of dedication starts
There's no hope for escaping.
When the changing seasons come and go
And your arms still hold your greatest pleasure
Then all the wars that have been fought
Have preserved the roots of treasure
And things you've gained are never lost
Through the worse into the better.

So take your hands and cup her face
Take a close look into her eyes
Cause there's no other love nor grace
Can change the friendship she confides
And no matter how the time is seasoned
Against the nakedness you share
Or grocery shopping on the weekend
Committment grows with time and care
And becomes more than a reason.

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2005-03-05 08:18 PM

I don't sing worth beans, but this is an
excellent poem that I am sure sings well.
Thanx!

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

2 posted 2005-03-05 08:18 PM

This is so romantic. Very good write.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2005-03-05 08:49 PM

Eric

"Committment grows with time and care
And becomes more than a reason."

Yes indeed! Loved this!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-03-05 11:36 PM

Enjoyed...James

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2005-03-05 11:49 PM

"When the changing seasons come and go
And your arms still hold your greatest pleasure
Then all the wars that have been fought
Have preserved the roots of treasure
And things you've gained are never lost
Through the worse into the better"

this is perfection...

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-03-06 06:25 AM

wise words
written
quite well

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-03-06 09:37 AM

a wonderful piece

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2005-03-06 10:20 AM

ethome,
   Love what you had to say!  These lines especially:
   "Then all the wars that have been fought
Have preserved the roots of treasure"  Yes.
So true.
           sadie

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