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sweetpoetess
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0 posted 2005-03-05 06:15 PM


Yard work can be fun
It can also be a pain
But it best to do yard work
On a clear, sunny day
When the wind is blowing
To keep you comfortable
But this can also be a problem
If the wind is too rough
Raking the leaves is a pain in the butt
But either way the yard work
Must always be done

Poetry is beauty in words.

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1 posted 2005-03-05 06:25 PM


This is such a nice little poem, thanks for sharing it with us

Andrew

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2 posted 2005-03-05 07:10 PM


yeah...that's why we pay someone to do ours
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3 posted 2005-03-05 07:32 PM


I ache to get out into the flower beds and get my hands dirty - and yearn for the green of the grass once again - now I desire it even more

Susan

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4 posted 2005-03-06 06:40 PM


A metaphor? Anyway, it sure has nice thoughts.
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