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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-03-05 01:26 PM



Who says silence echos not?
Let me prove them wrong today.
When they walk out side and see
The naked trees in winter.

They'll wither against the wind
Maybe they'll shake profuesly
And when the snow covers them
I hope they will find comfort
In the warmth of their cold hearts

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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1 posted 2005-03-05 02:05 PM


Great writing Juju, I really enjoyed the read

Andrew

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2 posted 2005-03-05 05:02 PM


great write

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-03-05 05:38 PM


love this!
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4 posted 2005-03-05 06:41 PM


Thank you.

Juju

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