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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2005-03-05 12:15 PM



Angels come and go

Could carve you're face in ice from a thought,
pick that perfect flower you like-
Order you're favorite drink or food
whisper those words that makes you smile,
if only i had the key to you're heart;
But like Angel's you come and go.

You're with me everyday,
Yet so distant and far-
you walk by my side in my thoughts
kiss me goodnight from afar,
If only you were closer i'd have you everyday;
But like Angel's you come and go.

Watching darkness befreind the light,
Comparing it to us-
Never together but always remembering
those distant thoughts are wondering,
Would you know those wounds of mine;
But like Angel's you come and go.

Found a place somewhere out of time,
a whole new world with you-
where no crowd gathers or hides
and all these dreams are mine,
You were always closer and far away;
But like angel's you were immortal in my mind.

© Copyright 2005 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-05 12:56 PM


yes angels come and go~
sometimes they even stay~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Juju
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2 posted 2005-03-05 12:58 PM


That was nice.  I like the repetitive pattern.

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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3 posted 2005-03-05 02:14 PM


A great write and an enjoyed read

Andrew

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4 posted 2005-03-05 04:08 PM


Great write, Lee!!!  I very much enjoyed reading your thoughts!!  

Take care,

Becka

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