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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-03-05 09:18 AM





Pengirlship

Like a deep blue sea’s growth of sponge
This blank page allows me expunge
A purge of words to follow through
An inkling of scripts’ black purview

Have you e’er seen my penmanship?
A bit of lilt toward sight’s worship
Of quill and ink, and parchment white
And scented oh so very light…

That electronics might just see
That hint of slight calligraphy
A wending of a desire sought
To rent one’s heart as it was taught

A gift received of ribbon, pen
For script well written, age of ten



©Karilea Rilling Jungel
13 January 2002
Slight revised...5 Mar 05

© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2005-03-05 09:21 AM


oh...I have seen your script Karilea!!  



I enjoyed this.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Marshalzu
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2 posted 2005-03-05 11:10 AM


Beautiful writing Karilea

Andrew

Martie
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3 posted 2005-03-05 11:20 AM


Sissie...your pengirlship is beatiful, as is your poetry!  
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4 posted 2005-03-05 11:42 AM


love the title...and the thoughts

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Susan
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5 posted 2005-03-05 06:33 PM


title drew me in - curiosity - verse kept me - lovely

Susan

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6 posted 2005-03-05 07:05 PM


just lovely
yes

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7 posted 2005-03-05 08:26 PM


And this is why you are called "Poetess"...
sometimes....not always....but sometimes.

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8 posted 2005-03-05 08:32 PM


This is a cute write. Enjoyed!!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.

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9 posted 2005-03-06 10:48 AM


Adorable write, Sunshine; I'm glad you're sailing as girl of pen...
                miscellanea

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10 posted 2005-03-06 10:59 AM


As girl of pen ~ you are a ten!

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

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11 posted 2005-03-06 04:49 PM


good write
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12 posted 2005-03-06 07:30 PM


I enjoyed this very much Karilea!  

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

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13 posted 2005-03-06 08:11 PM


Karilea, this is so beautiful. I love the penmanship.
Bridget Shenachie
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14 posted 2005-03-10 11:18 PM


Bumped this to the top--because I miss you--because I'm familiar with your pengirlship and find it much nicer than any computer font--because I'm looking for your next post.

Shenachie

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