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MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

0 posted 2005-03-05 07:38 AM

as the sun
goes down
darkness fills
the sky~
stars shining
as diamonds
brings a tear
to my eye~

a tear
for joy
a tear
for sorrow~
a prayer
for a better
tomorrow~

a day filled
with sunshine
love and laughter~
family
friends
happy memories
to cherish
ever after~

the one
i loved
want close
by my side~
the sounds
of the ocean
the rise
of the tide~

beautiful flowers
birds and bees~
arommic smells
branches flowing
from a cool breeze`

making castles
in the sand~
the way i feel
by the touch
of your hand~

`

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-03-05 08:03 AM

Very good enjoyed the rhyme..thank you...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-03-05 08:31 AM

MGROVES
A lovely read, enjoyed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-05 06:22 PM

beautiful

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-03-05 06:27 PM

I love the soft of this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

5 posted 2005-03-06 11:06 AM

Beautiful images made more so by being out to skillful rhyme!

Excellent. Thank you!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2005-03-06 11:51 AM

Oh Yeah...now this is what I'm talkin about!
Wonderful!
TD

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2005-03-06 02:07 PM

i thank you all for the kind replies~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

8 posted 2005-03-06 05:50 PM

You've come a long way, Marsha! Excellent write!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-03-06 07:06 PM

Excellent...very much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

10 posted 2005-03-06 08:29 PM

Enjoyed the uplifting images and rhyme

~sadie

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

11 posted 2005-03-07 06:14 PM

bless all of you for you
kind replies

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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