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Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

0 posted 2005-03-04 06:47 PM

I
sit here
in the darkness
knowing I spite myself
yet feelings can not remain hidden
if truth is to be held accountable.

I
have learned
to free that which wants freedom
and if I must take the blame
it is something I am so used to doing
that the pain that remains
is just another part of who I am
and who I am meant to be...

So I free you, to be who you are
as I am always going to be me,
the one who is never enough...

so says the mirror

~A~

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2005-03-04 07:06 PM

touching~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-03-04 07:41 PM

AMEN!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-04 08:04 PM

you will always be enough for me

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2005-03-04 10:08 PM

"and if I must take the blame
it is something I am so used to doing
that the pain that remains
is just another part of who I am
and who I am meant to be..."

Wonderful lines..and very felt.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2005-03-04 11:47 PM

this is awesome...

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

6 posted 2005-03-05 11:49 AM

between the layers, lies the truth in glass~~

thank you
~A~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-03-05 06:35 PM

the mirror can only reflect our own perceptions - interpretations - this is well done -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

NightFall
Member

since 2004-01-28

Posts 88
The land known as England

8 posted 2005-03-05 06:58 PM

"so says the mirror"

Powerful, i loved this, a perception of your reality through the mirror.
C.J

The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

9 posted 2005-03-06 07:52 AM

your perception says this, but perhaps the onlooker is who they want to be...and want to share the burden with you.
maybe you are enough?

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2005-03-06 09:10 AM

This is an amazing piece of writing.
Very much enjoyed. Chris

Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.
~ Javan

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2005-03-13 08:39 AM

for myself and Alice...thank you for your caring thoughts...

M

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2005-03-13 01:56 PM

I think there's a little bit of Alice in all of us.

Hugging you.

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

13 posted 2005-03-13 05:47 PM

I love it when you have these reflective conversations; very cool.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

14 posted 2005-03-13 06:08 PM

Wonderful write

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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