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G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2005-03-04 05:54 PM

Elegance grace charm and style
Picture perfect is what I see
Her beautiful face and radiant smile
Has taken hold so deep in me

I know her not that fact is true
This angel set before my sight
A vision sought what can I do
To join her now upon her flight

Reach out to her through written verse
With all the thoughts I have to share
My heart will stir a loving curse
If she will meet me I’ll be there

The final thought within my mind
Beckons me to call to you
Though I know not what I will find
I offer friendship strong and true

G. A. Webb
03/04/05

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-03-04 06:05 PM

this is so incredibly sweet...

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-03-04 06:09 PM

I believe a plea like this should not fail.

Nicely done.

CG

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-04 06:38 PM

beautiful

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2005-03-04 07:04 PM

yes,it is beautiful~
touches one's heart~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-03-04 07:36 PM

Good Gosh Man...where HAVE you been?
Welcome home, GA....it's a wonderful poem,
and a delight to welcome you once again...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2005-03-04 07:37 PM

Nicely done.
It only takes a second to remember all the firsts. Good luck.
TD

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2005-03-04 10:14 PM

This is a very heartfelt plea...I do hope that she will respond and hear your cry!

~ARh

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2005-03-04 11:27 PM

Nice...James

G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

9 posted 2005-03-07 10:14 AM

Thank you all for reading and your comments, I'm glad you liked this piece. And for those who were wondering, it did not have the effect I had hoped for. But it's nice to be writing again and even nicer still to see that people still enjoy my work. Thank you all again.

Sunshine: Thank you for the warm welcome back. It's been quite a while since I've written anything and it feels good to be doing it again. As far as where I've been, well let's just say, lost in the dark...lol! Thank you again.

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

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