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Master
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0 posted 2005-03-04 03:28 PM



I found no easy way to lure the muse.
I bought her flowers, sweets and lingerie.
She came and left without an excuse.

You said, “be more specific.” Overused
Specifics tend to turn into clichés.
I found no easy way to lure the muse.

I learned about her past to pay my dues,
I imitated Frost and Eliot. Dismayed,
I watched her leave without an excuse.

I asked her out to dinner. She refused.
You said, “use modern diction,” and I made
All effort that I could to lure the muse.

I wove each line of verse into a noose.
I hung on words and prayed for her to stay,
She never even gave me an excuse.

I knelt before her and I kissed her shoes.
Like no one else, I wanted her that day.
I found no easy way to lure the muse,
And proudly, she left with no excuse.

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1 posted 2005-03-04 03:31 PM


fickle little things, aren't they? This was fun
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2 posted 2005-03-04 03:38 PM


neat piece!
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3 posted 2005-03-04 04:04 PM


Excellent work, Master!
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4 posted 2005-03-04 04:25 PM


lol

women!!

great piece Master!

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5 posted 2005-03-04 07:15 PM



Hmmm...seems to me she left her twin...LOL.

Well done, despite the 'lack of' Muse...

CG

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6 posted 2005-03-04 07:22 PM


enjoyed~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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