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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
Incredible is how you explain my heart But yet a relationship you dismiss to start You say in me you can always confide But now you feelings towards me are blind Even said I would be the perfect wife However you avoid getting deeper in my life All this confusion has caused me to cry But signs have shown me the reason why You will only see me as a friend And this reason is difficult to comprehend I won't get the love that I deserve Because I don't possess the perfect curve My body goes beyond a petite size 8 So for that reason, we cannot date? Now my mind is beginning to understand Why you politely refuse to hold my hand My body won't give you desires of temptation The fact that it's true brings me frustration Even though you say my deamour is kind My body distracts you from loving my mind I don't know what else to say It's hard to believe you think this way You seem to be appalled at my sight My feelings for you now don't seem right I ponder if I should sit and wait But I know inside that it's too late My body you can't seem to look past And for that reason, our friendship won't last For a moment, it made me sad But now I have reason to be glad Cause in my mind, I hold no doubt Someone will love me, both inside and out ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
It is pretty sad that so many people are hung up on looks, but I am glad that there is a hope in your heart because there is people out there who are not so shallow and who appreciate true beauty. Good work  Andrew |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good outlook here |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...A good thing you found out before the marriage....James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
heartfelt  hugs to youm'friend~ and you shall find one to love you inside and out~ outside eventually fades with age~ inside grows more beautiful with age~ and you are well on your way~ My spirit will rise |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
It's a shame. His loss! I imagine you as a warm, caring person with the honesty that will bridge trust. Keep good thoughts going about yourself. (and those size 8s will change over the years anyway... you're right, they are not the important thing here!) miscellanea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SweetSerenity In the field of gravity the feather and the pound drop the same. |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
Thank you for the comments . . it's truly appreciated. ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
I loved this....and I too have been here...finally feels good to let them go too! If the body is all anyone sees then they truly are not worth it! A very dear friend taught me that...and some thing I will take with me always! Good luck in your journey to let him go...you will be better off in the long run! Take care, Becka |
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