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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-03-04 07:40 AM


I Stood

I stood before a temples door
It’s one I’ve never seen before
Made of phantoms layered bone
Mortared bone to look like stone

The door lay open to my stare
And there within a dim lit lair
Walked the ghosts of minds guitar
Reaching for a sky of star

Caught within a gale of pour
Grasping for the evermore
They sang a song of grunt and groan
Exasperations song of moan

I looked away this sight of fright
Into the stars the lit my light
And swore that I would change my way
And stay within my path of stay

To stay within this garden earth
And live the Eden of my birth

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-03-04 08:18 AM



I had a few doors beckoning me last night...
I think is was the Mexican lunch I ate.



~*~

The door lay open to my stare
And there within a dim lit lair
Walked the ghosts of minds guitar
Reaching for a sky of star

Caught within a gale of pour
Grasping for the evermore
They sang a song of grunt and groan
Exasperations song of moan

~*~

Yep...sounds just like that!


LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-03-04 08:21 AM


same thing happened to me on way to my wedding...hehehee

Nifty lesson in this morning's melogy

Thank you kind sir and Happy Friday

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-03-04 08:33 AM


Sunshine,
You know Mexican food does the same to me.


LeeJ,
LOL good morning sweety.

MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-03-04 09:10 AM


a good morning to ya sir
enjoyed~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-03-04 10:49 AM


Yeppers! Stay your path and your afterlife will be a veritable Eden!

I love reading your poetry. Thank you for the daily gift!

Loving hugs,
EA

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6 posted 2005-03-04 03:12 PM


afternoon Sy

wonderful write once again
each day is a blessing with you

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7 posted 2005-03-04 10:10 PM


Good eve Sir Sy...and you can leave off the
"Sweetie" part with me, ok?  

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