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MGROVES
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God
put stars
up in the sky~
gave us faith
never to
give up
but always
try~

Plenty of
plants
lots of
trees~
animals
birds
butterflies
and bees~

Food
and water
to help
us grow~
life and
love
with beauty
to show~

When aplant
or animal
is neglected~
no loving
care
life is
rejected~

Plants
without water
wither
and die~
without love
same can
happen
to you
and I~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

© Copyright 2005 marsha groves~adragonsdream~ - All Rights Reserved
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what hope! thank you for this!
MGROVES
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your welcome m'friend~
hugs back at ya dixie~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sunshine
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Without love...
the spirit surely shrivels...

A very nice, uplifting write, Poet.

LeeJ
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hugs for a painting filled with insight...and beauty thank you
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MGROVES
A delight to read.
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thankyou all for kind replies~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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I'm sure glad I found this.  It is just what I've been looking for!  Really enjoyed your thinking and presentation.

     miscellanea
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8 posted 05-13-2005 07:50 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

thankyou,  someone must of known
i needed to hear those words of hope
again too. never give up

      bless you

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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Nice message...James
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So true ,  with love to cherish hearts flourish

Hope
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11 posted 05-15-2005 11:18 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marcia~
The faith to fly
beyond this plain
Love carries us far
yet returns us again~

You are in lovely poetic form, lady~
*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Very nice and well said. And what you say is true. I like the structure of this poem too. Nice Job!

Kristabell
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Never, ever!!  
It's all part of the process, and life is most certainly, worth nurturing.

Great message here, good poetess~
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I only give up
when I see the rocks stacked
and even then I work the dreams
to find another way in

great thoughts ms G
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This is true. And, you put it so beautifully.
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Reading again...beautiful message....James
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thanks to you all for your replies~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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You speak a truth...but like it was a gospel..and yet it was always there all the time..but either we just dont see it..or cannot see it...ejoyed this poem...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

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Beautiful spirit and Hope in your words.  Nicely done!
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20 posted 05-20-2012 06:52 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

really needed this today. thank god he blessed me with all of you.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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