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Open Poetry #35

Foolish Hope Of Love

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-03-04 03:47 AM

Colder thoughts invade my smile
as I press on dying inside

The love I wasted on someone so
nice yet so cruel. Why did I have
to be the fool?

Why did his thoughtless tongue
capture my soul? Why did I honesty
think he could ever love me when
I can barely look at myself in the
eyes.

My grey blue eyes shed yet more tears
but yet none drip down my face. For
I feel nothing anymore. My love for
someone that I felt so quick stabs at me
like a thousand lies folded into a paper
napkin.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2005-03-04 11:00 AM

Oh I like that last line, the paper napkin-great image.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2005-03-04 03:00 PM

thank's

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-04 03:45 PM

enjoyed

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

4 posted 2005-03-04 04:40 PM

Beautiful!!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-03-05 11:37 PM

Nice writing...James

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