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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-03-03 09:33 PM




#1
I want you to hold me close
and never let go again
I wish you could just save me
from all of the trajety
surrounding my life today
Kiss my lips and say to me
every thing will be fine

#2

So uninspired I am,
I walk among lily pads
I seem to always get lost,
tangled in long stems


Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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with you
1 posted 2005-03-03 10:33 PM


loved both of these
sweetpoetess
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2 posted 2005-03-03 10:34 PM


I really liked both of them.

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Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-03-03 10:57 PM


Yes, to be saved, and protected - and those dratted lilly pads - oy!   Enjoyed the heart behind both of these -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-03-03 11:32 PM


Nice...James
Juju
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In your dreams
5 posted 2005-03-04 03:48 PM


thankn you all
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