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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2005-03-03 06:44 PM




Fiery Lady

Unaided my ship is drawn to your Sun,
I am but a sailor bound to the mast.
For your flaming heart has its magic spun
And the spell of your love has been cast.
Resist I cannot, I’ve taken the bait —
Onto your island I helpless capsize.
There spellbound I’m drawn, I follow my fate
And blissfully drown in your dark, liquid eyes.
To you, my Lady, my heart yields a plea —
My yearning heart would your flaming heart choose;
For as the Queen of the land and the sea
You have lit an unquenchable fuse —
Oh,  burn now! Burn your fire within!
— And as the Sun make my Universe spin.

CG

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1 posted 2005-03-03 07:12 PM



CG...Welcome home...

and this...is a wonderful !

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

CastleGuard
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2 posted 2005-03-04 12:13 PM



Thank you, Lady Sunshine.

Your words warm the heart and soul.

CG

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3 posted 2005-03-04 12:22 PM


this is really wonderful
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2005-03-04 01:10 AM


And as the Sun make my Universe spin....

What love has thou spoken,
flamed lips,speak with fire,
to share thy universe,
would be thy greatest
desire!

Words that burn,
a thousand miles
into my heart,

piercing the darkest
valleys, lighting my path,
seeking you, as I step into
your universe of love...

~Your fiery words do inspire,
igniting this flame, fueling
passion higher and higher!

~SO glad to see and read you!
~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


CastleGuard
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5 posted 2005-03-04 01:37 AM



SEA - thank you.

ARH - to provide inspiration; to share feelings, emotions, desires, and life's journeys - is every poet's humblest wish, and I thank you from my heart for such a passionate response.

CG

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2005-03-04 03:33 AM


Your heart is so welcome! "The One Who Guards My Castle"!
Home is where your heart is....
~Thy Fiery Lady

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7 posted 2005-03-04 04:46 AM


awesome

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
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8 posted 2005-03-04 04:03 PM


like velvet this write
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