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LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

0 posted 2005-03-03 11:32 AM


Just hang at your package store
Swilling down that booze.
You can't have back your girlfriend,
To make her flat and abused.

You can't weasel out my black book,
Like you did with Balladeer.
To ferret out a new love,
like you alluded to in here.

I know you'll sniff out new prey
Like a hound dog on a scent.
But like the skunk we know you are
It would last but one moment.

So cry those crocodile tears,
We all know you're a scalawag.
Your reputation for beastly deeds,
Reflects on you, Toerag.

© Copyright 2005 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-03-03 12:00 PM


Hey!!  Looks like we're in for a rip roarin' time!!
I'm SOOOO glad you're back!

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
2 posted 2005-03-03 12:36 PM


I'm back for just a while.  I hope you are doing well.
Toerag
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Ala bam a
3 posted 2005-03-03 02:47 PM


Who the hell is this guy?...I new a gay sailor with this name once...but he ran off with a ewe?...Is this you?...or ewe..or whatever?...good to see ya my friend...luv ya

Toe

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-03-03 03:29 PM


you've been missed
miscellanea
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OH
5 posted 2005-03-03 04:08 PM


What a nice surprise to see you back at it again!  Put a smile on my face!
           miscellanea

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
6 posted 2005-03-03 05:17 PM


Has everybody else noticed how trustworthy my Truth-o-Meter is? The closer I hit to the truth, the louder Toerag screams.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2005-03-03 06:27 PM


Oh my! You do not paint a very flattering picture of my friend Toe! ~ But that's okay, I adore him in spite of the truth!

It is so good to read you again! You have come back in fine form, Sailor!

Loves 'n haha's!
Linda

Balladeer
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8 posted 2005-03-03 07:24 PM


Go get him, sailor! He's been bad-mouthing you the whole time you been gone....be merciless!!

(Toe, you gonna take that? DOn't be a wimp - git after him!!!)

Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2005-03-03 07:28 PM


LOL, you guys are a neverending story!!!
Thank you, for this is one day I really needed a good belly laugh. (did you see this belly moving with laughter? nope? ok, so, I am no longer wearing bikinis, am not belly dancing ~sigh~ though I do have an elderly gentleman who follows me around in the store daily, panting LOL)

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2005-03-03 07:46 PM


The boys are back
and the forums are jumpin'
hey ya,
hey ya
the boys are back!

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