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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2005-03-03 10:06 AM

Neither won.
Yet, I lost.

Have you lost
your craving?

Me. I crave
my losses.

Mind. Peace.
Matter. You.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2005-03-03 10:58 AM

I crave my losses... how well I understand that!!! *S*

I liked this very much, my friend... great work! *S*

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-03-03 01:26 PM

Ooooh, a short but perfect keeper!
Thankyou for this my smilin' friend !
hugs, Chris

Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.
~ Javan

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-03 03:19 PM

understood

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2005-03-03 04:14 PM

It's great to read your words again.  This was thought provoking...
I really liked your word play in these two lines:
  "Have you lost
   your craving?

   Me. I crave
   my  losses"

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-03-04 09:00 AM

Sudhir, my friend
I adore your new voice.
It reminds me of the great beat poets.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

6 posted 2005-03-04 11:10 AM

merci beaucoup!

...beat poet... makes me think

regards
sudhir

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2005-03-05 02:25 AM

Enjoyed this!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2005-03-05 08:26 AM

Liking this introspection, Suddie!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2005-03-05 09:06 AM

Sometimes they are a loss for a reason..

I did enjoy your words and thoughts.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2005-03-05 03:44 PM

thank ye all...

regards
sudhir

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2005-03-05 07:39 PM

interesting play with words and nice twist with the ending -

Susan

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2005-03-06 04:52 PM

good read

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

13 posted 2005-03-06 05:39 PM

Delightful!

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

14 posted 2005-04-05 11:57 AM

nice. have you been reading adrienne rich.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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