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Mere Tears |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 wishing you happy this day... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no flakes of white will soothe the burn when the heart hears the music far off in the distance |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I hope that this eloquently expressed poem on passion's pain, is not a true reflection of what you are experiencing, Dear Poetic Soul! Sending you an extra warm hug, EA |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Choshi, I'm running out of ways to tell you how much I appreciate your poetry...  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What Karilea said. Your poetry is perfection, and conveys such honest emotions. Always a pleasure, choshi~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very vivid... very powerful... excellent!! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
wishing you happy this day... Thank you Lee J same to you back |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I hope that this eloquently expressed poem on passion's pain, is not a true reflection of what you are experiencing, Dear Poetic Soul! Sending you an extra warm hug, EA Thank you ~EA, especially for those extra warm hugs..... back  |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Awww, Sunshine, you are so sweet.... back to you dear |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
What Karilea said. Your poetry is perfection, and conveys such honest emotions. Always a pleasure, choshi~ Awwww, thank you, I am glad it comes through warm wishes ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
no flakes of white will soothe the burn when the heart hears the music far off in the distance Oh yes, Inked One, you do know the territory very well...... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Suthern....Warm wishes ~P |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you James |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very creative, I can feel the warmth of the fire and the chill of the snowflakes nice writing. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Rosebud, I 'm glad the poem evoked those sensations of cold and warmth ~P |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 so few words and so well said."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Susan |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes such feelings with so few words~ My spirit will rise |
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