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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2005-03-02 01:16 PM

There is no object to be
craved.

Desire stands alone.

In thoughts...we strive for what is
absent from our grasp.

And yet my empty hands are filled
with pleasure.

When my thoughts hold only
you.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 2005-03-02 01:20 PM

What a beautiful poem

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-03-02 01:25 PM

And yet my empty hands are filled
with pleasure.

When my thoughts hold only
you.

those lines wrap this up beautifully Eric!
Well done!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-03-02 01:34 PM

Ericc
Good one, enjoyed.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-03-02 01:37 PM

*SIGH*
you do this so easily, so beautifully....always enjoy

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2005-03-02 01:44 PM

Now THIS is what I call beautiful!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2005-03-02 06:07 PM

You say things so simply, and yet beautifully Eric.

Skill becomes ART when it appears to be effortless.

And this you do, m'friend.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-03-02 06:51 PM

Excellent...James

Cbreeze
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since 2003-03-30

Posts 4

8 posted 2005-03-02 09:49 PM

Hello friend

Your in my thoughts.... lovely!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-03-02 10:57 PM

sigh

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

10 posted 2005-03-02 11:26 PM

Pleasure to read

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2005-03-03 09:36 AM

Oh, yessssssssssssssssssss. *S* I always love your work... this is one of my very favorites!! *S*

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2005-03-03 09:38 AM

Well, you've got my attention
Pure magic Eric

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2005-03-03 09:53 AM

Wonderful thoughts, Ericc~
May they always be filled with love.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

14 posted 2005-03-03 10:19 AM

You are just sooooooo darn good - love that ending -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

15 posted 2005-03-03 10:20 AM

very nicely written...

regards
sudhir

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

16 posted 2005-03-03 10:29 AM

Eric...Beautiful, as always!

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

17 posted 2005-03-03 11:10 AM

lovely Eric ~P

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