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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I knew where she would sit when she entered the room there was something there in her eyes that said what she wanted like the afternoon when it finds it's favorite window to warm so I adjusted my subtle but left my obvious just a bit non chalant twisting my moustache like the bond guy when caught contemplating cognac and cleavage like hemingway would a cuban I imagined us elsewhere suggesting even somewhere else with body language bi-lingual but she was fluent at reading between my lines like fingers pretending into first time gloves that had been worn for hours and it seemed to be forever from the door to the corner but she took her time to make sure my eyes had time to take her survey and she knew the light and how to make shadows linger where she wanted consideration she confessed to my thoughts about her weaknesses which were her strong points and yes they were on when she leaned low like it was normal to be cold in a room full of summer and asked if she could sit and was I expecting anyone or would I mind and was I thristy she brought her own like she suspected I was a sipping kind that she wanted to drown in her total religious experience _________dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-02-2005 09:13 AM).] |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Very interesting poem and read. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
now you just know I AM smiling here... religious experience....lmao...with you, more like sacred sweetie.  Good Morning California..... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Um, yes, what Donna said... something about sacred... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
she confessed to my thoughts about her weaknesses which were her strong points and yes they were on when she leaned low like it was normal to be cold in a room full of summer I thank you...from the heart, for noticing her, and then, knowing her whole being, instead of using her weaknesses against her or fearing her b/c of them...your a very insightful man...one whom I'd really love to spend the afternoon with, picking each other's brains... INcredible my friend..... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahh, yes.. I'm suddenly at a loss for words... Mind if I just sit here for an hour or so and ponder this one D? Well done. ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
D- this has got to be one of my favorites - but then it seems each one is - but this one, seeps right through me - ah, to be in that room   SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ladies for the eyes on this...I appreciate each of you.. psss susan, you were there..(grin) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Adjusted your subtle, but left your obvious... Long form looks good on you. Hmmm. Now just who is the hunter and the hunted in this one? *grin* Love the title of this. Makes me want to sign up for the peace corps so I can bring some religion to the unenlightened. Hmmm... maybe I'm thinkin' about the Jesuits instead. Indigo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "like it was normal to be cold in a room full of summer" Your unique way, is captivating!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I wish I could say my first thought here, but I can't ....sigh this, just totally blew me away Mr D. Be sure to do that to me again..ok?  Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lauren, hugs to you and that little wigglecon ____ indi, mmmm yes ms, convert me but do it slow please...I want to savor the suffering, thanks lady ___ ms martie, lil neighbor...is chilly here..how about on your side of the hill? Thanks lady friend ____ ms maree...glad it worked for you..will try to find another way to blow you away...or at least make a draft around your smile hem..thanks ____ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a story! nicely told! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you work a woman like a bottle of wine from the stomping of the grapes to her sweet aftertaste.. and lee, my friend, you can pick his brain, i'm picking his.......well use your imagaination |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
passing shadows, you are a blessing when you wiggle your magic on the humble of my words..thank you _____________ ms inky..what am I going to do with you...(shhhh will tell you later) you are a favorite pleasure lady friend |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow! cant say here what this has me doing~ damn~ hot one dark~ really enjoyed this one~ |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Well told story. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
WoW |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
and it seemed to be forever from the door to the corner but she took her time to make sure my eyes had time to take her survey and she knew the light and how to make shadows linger where she wanted consideration ohhh, yeah - I can see those shadows now - That was a brilliant piece of writing from the male perspective of what it is about women that drive us crazy. |
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