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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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There may be target practice. An arrow set to meet the center launched from a taught cord sails across the air and lands At first it hits an outer ring but the archer persists for the goal is the center nothing like the top score for the sake of a target With an arrow launch a pistol shot a shot put throw something has to sail the air cross air, land and sea Target practice streaks across the heavens all below the watchful eye of commanding civilizations; with arrows launched, goals persist winter harvest is near. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-02-2005 07:31 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your words are like that of arrows, teaching everyone who reads... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Don't know about teaching everyone but even those unable to stretch their minds beyond standard poetry forms can find something, I think.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As an archer... I really like this piece, Martin. Thank you! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
words said... understood... written with passion ~miscellanea |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Then there are target practice poets among us. I do better throwing darts!  |
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