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Voiceless
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Under the stars upon the wind

0 posted 2005-03-01 09:31 PM


Anticipation

Strangers we are not,
but lovers we have yet to become.
The only barrier left to be broken, a kiss
and the tickling anticipation has begun.

We stand close together as just friends,
but then you ask me to dance.
With a shakey smile and sweaty palms
I nod and life my eyes to meet your glance.

Awkwardly, at first, we take a step
slowly we move across the floor
and two have become one,
but as you lightly hold me my senses demand more.

From the mass of curls on top of my head
one loose strand falls to rest on my cheek.
With a slightly shakey hand you push it back,
but then you hesitate, I sneak a peek.

Our eyes are held captive in each others glance
and my heart skips what should have been a beat
unconsciously my tongue wets my dry lips, you see.
I flush as my body is struck with a wave of heat.

Your breath gently caresses my face.
Music, thought, and everything else becomes a haze.
My eye lids gently surrender to a blissful warmth sweetly my senses reel as our lips melt in a lingering graze.

© Copyright 2005 Jennifer K.G. - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-03-02 09:47 AM


a passionate write, a sweet beginning
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2005-03-02 11:16 AM


Sounds very romantic to me, nice writing, I enjoyed immensely

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



sweetpoetess
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3 posted 2005-03-02 11:34 AM


So romantic this is.

Poetry is beauty in words.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-03-03 11:17 PM


Enjoyed...James
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displaced
5 posted 2005-03-04 05:10 PM


this is sweet
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