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Martie
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0 posted 2005-03-01 06:19 PM



A Black Dog Doing What I Wanted to Do

Spilling down a cliff
wild with sniffing new clover
running from "here boy"

© Copyright 2005 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2005-03-01 06:24 PM


Enjoyed...James
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2 posted 2005-03-01 06:25 PM


Sounds like a dog I know!

JL


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3 posted 2005-03-01 06:31 PM


YES! I do know that feeling! When dogs feel it they do it....we humans have to be more sedate, and sometimes we end up with only daydreams when we could be -- should be -- running the hills!

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4 posted 2005-03-01 06:49 PM



WOW....

this is PERFECT....

and I want to do it too!

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5 posted 2005-03-01 06:55 PM


Neat !!
hugs, Chris

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6 posted 2005-03-01 10:03 PM


Love your sense of wonder, Martie.
I could almost feel the sun on my face and the wind in my hair.

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7 posted 2005-03-02 08:15 AM


This gives a visual that would turn up the corners of any mouth... even as we share the longing. *S* Excellent!
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8 posted 2005-03-02 08:18 AM


OH NO!  Buck is on the loose again!  Oops, can't be--he's red!  

Yes!  the stir of freedom!  a very enjoyable read...

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9 posted 2005-03-02 08:20 AM


yes, sometimes we wish we could run free like them, unrestrained.  well done Martie.  
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10 posted 2005-03-02 04:26 PM


he is free to do as he pleases

right now? I feel like being that dog, to run from "here boy"

wonderful Martie

Mxx

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11 posted 2005-03-02 05:42 PM


I LOVE this.

I have often said that I quit going out because when I do get out of the house it's like a dog getting out of the gate.

Thank you for expressing that thought with a bit more elegance for me!


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12 posted 2005-03-02 07:07 PM


I think we have all chased a black dog or even have felt like one - you write wonders Martie - Paul
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