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NightFall
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since 2004-01-28
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The land known as England

0 posted 2005-03-01 03:25 PM


Time is moving slowley
The paper is all blured
My words are spinning around the page
lost in an everlasting gaze
Im trapped
Now that you are gone
Im falling in to a hole
A neve ending tunnle of time.

In time nothing lasts forever
In time people grow old and die
In time footprints dissapear
and shadows are lost in time.

Life is just like time
It passes with each day

Watching people live and die
Watching night turn to day
Watching time in every single way
Before time swallows itself.


To everone who i have loved who have gone from my life, time passes with each day, savor it the best you can and enjoy the amount you have.

The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return

© Copyright 2005 Cheryl Jones - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-03-01 03:26 PM


Lovely writing Cheryl.  
NightFall
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since 2004-01-28
Posts 88
The land known as England
2 posted 2005-03-01 03:28 PM


Thankyou.
C.J

The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
3 posted 2005-03-01 03:43 PM


Savor it... yes.  It passes too quickly.

Enjoyed.
         miscellanea

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2005-03-01 06:14 PM


Time is here and past, never in the future, until it is here, then past again.
Great write!!

JL

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