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miscellanea
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0 posted 2005-03-01 11:34 AM


Loyal Voyager passes  dime on ice
At intersections, six cyls too slow
But her heater works, oh so nice,
Thanks to the hands of a man I know.

Tanked and oiled, a.m. ready to go
Windshield scraped of snow;
Engine keyed and heater on,
Thanks to the hands of the man I know.

Three words often I have heard  
But they say love is what you show;
Whether it be to fix a meal
Or provide warmth among days’ snow.
(Thanks to the hands of the man I know.)

(*Thanks for fixing my heater before I even thought to ask…)

© Copyright 2005 Cathy Farmer - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-03-01 11:45 AM


Well darn....I hate when that happens!
LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-03-01 12:02 PM


Poop!!!!

JL
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3 posted 2005-03-01 01:10 PM


I hate when that happens!


JL

JL
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4 posted 2005-03-01 01:12 PM


You found it!?
Great write miscellanea.

Enjoyed

JL

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5 posted 2005-03-01 01:16 PM


ah!  You found it!     Well done.
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2005-03-01 01:30 PM


Oooh so glad you found it again..
Love this one...well done!
Makes me want to say 'ahhhh'
Hugs~

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

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7 posted 2005-03-01 11:22 PM


Be happy.....you've found one of these:
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....believe me, you could do a lot worse.

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Martie
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8 posted 2005-03-01 11:33 PM


Now that's better!!  
ecrivan
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9 posted 2005-03-02 01:43 AM


what warmth one can generate in those cold cabs...nice write


miscellanea
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10 posted 2005-03-02 08:44 PM


Thanks Everyone for taking time to respond.  Also, wanted to thank my husband for being the wonderful person he is.  
     cathy

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11 posted 2005-04-06 07:57 PM


wondeerfully written tribute to those things that happen to make our lives much better - you do it so well - Paul
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12 posted 2005-04-07 10:20 AM


enjoyed
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13 posted 2005-04-07 01:44 PM


thanks for sharing this one
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