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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-03-01 07:01 AM



quiet of morning

frenzy peacefully sleeping

tucked into fresh snow

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2005-03-01 08:03 AM


Mmm this felt cosy, even if tucked into fresh snow.

Maree.

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-03-01 08:18 AM


icebox
Sleeping in the nude
Under winters snows blanket
Waiting springs etude

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-03-01 08:41 AM


ah....smooth
Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2005-03-01 08:58 AM


ohhhhhhh...

those are the morning you want to stay under the covers a bit longer and warm each other..

then get up and make coffee and waffles...

dang..now I want waffles..

  

somehow this snow seems to belong. Don't ask me to explain that..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

littlewing
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5 posted 2005-03-01 09:01 AM


you said it, we have that right now, icey.
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6 posted 2005-03-01 09:27 AM


Sounds as if you were looking out of my window while you writing this gem.
hugs, Chris

Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.
~ Javan

Martie
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7 posted 2005-03-01 11:34 AM


icebox

I have never lived where it snows...sometimes, I wish I had.  Your poem makes it seem soft and comforting.     If only it wasn't so darn cold!  I guess that's why you put lash next to velvet.

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