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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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A dusk light To the West Through still As yet Leafless trees The slender figure In pale blue farmer jeans Whose cuffs reach down Over brown leather shoes She walks A ghost As faint as mist It is March . . . It is long ago |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Take but few words Painting with pen or brush And place me in the thoughts Enjoyed the poetry Gloom |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Image, images... The woman is as clear, in the minds eye, as rain glistening on a red wheelbarrow viewed through the eyes of Williams.... very good indeed.... ___________ice ><> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I smell it too. Nicely done, m'friend. The humidity damned near choked me...and the fog was twice as bad. why do I think you know graveyards? (Prolly 'cause I recognize a haunting.) enjoyed  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This....excellence. That's all that needs to be said....simply excellence. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
very nice. i'll remember this... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Expansion through brevity! Could visualize perfectly ~sadie |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
good clear images hear, that sounds like March  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A well-expressed and hauntingly beautiful memory. Love & Light, EA |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
quote: *nods* Great writing Huan Yi  Andrew |
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