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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2005-02-28 10:09 PM



She walked from forest green
Through the dank of the shadows,
Into places heard but never been,
A walk wasting one tomorrow.
The pavement cracked and stained
Had never been white as her dress
Which was pure as a spring rain
She of blue eyes and golden tress.
In the shadowed land of blood red brick
Was his fortress and a silent home
Windows bars held strong and thick
Where the shadow wizard lived alone,
She came to explore his mind
Learning things beyond the light
They talked with flowing glasses of wine
Beyond sleep deep into the heart of night.
Till with heavy eyes she did doze
Listening to his words spoke so calm
Dreams overtook her before the dawn
And at daybreak from sleep she arose
Her Own soft bed she rested upon.
Sunbeams dispersing all the shadows.


Gloom

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-02-28 10:21 PM


You are so wonderful....my heart is so grateful, You know how I love this!

BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mr. Wizard, you are the master!

Thank You,

~Love and Hugs
PRINCESS


We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


Opoetry4me
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Dixon, Ky USA
2 posted 2005-02-28 10:25 PM


DITTO! Wonderful piece! ~sigh~ Enjoyed!
Professor Gloom
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of Depression
3 posted 2005-02-28 10:31 PM


Thank You, A Romantic Heart,
Pleased you enjoyed

Thank you, Opoetry4me,
Glade you liked my words

Gloom

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-03-01 08:54 AM


well...hmmm...yeah, nice write
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2005-03-01 11:48 AM


very interesting title and images portrayed~~

LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-03-01 11:58 AM


Ultimate and complete, this was amazing...thank you for sharing.
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