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ESP
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since 2000-01-25

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Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2005-02-28 04:32 PM

The Neverending Story

Today is the day of threes.
In three days time, it will be
The third of a month,
Three months on from the
Day you walked away.

Tomorrow won’t be a day of threes.
But I will awaken, life will go on.
The story isn’t over yet.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-02-28 04:33 PM

it never seems to end, does it?

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2005-02-28 04:42 PM

Nope! But that could be a good thing...it's never over till it's over after all. I might have my friend again someday. So I suppose it would be worse if it was the end.
Sorry that probably didn't make much sense!

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

3 posted 2005-02-28 05:02 PM

Not to me at the least. But that's okay. Nicely done.

"In the book of life the answers aren't in the back." Charlie Brown

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-02-28 05:45 PM

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

5 posted 2005-03-01 04:38 PM

yes! this is so true.

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

6 posted 2005-03-02 04:15 PM

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

7 posted 2005-06-19 02:40 AM

Oh my....I keep on reading these!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2005-06-19 03:37 AM

Understanding these feelings , yes its never over until its over

Hope

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2005-06-19 05:18 AM

Your poem expresses this longing so powerfully ...

when there is the counting going on, it means the related event is predominating.

May things unfold for your highest good.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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