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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-02-28 03:39 PM



By night...we are
less.

Layers of our becoming released
beneath a fingers path.

We meet our desires in the
clear space of
nothing.

And with no object to be
held...there is only
our embrace.

© Copyright 2005 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-28 03:44 PM


Oh....perfect! hugs, Chris

Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.
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2 posted 2005-02-28 03:44 PM



Ah Eric...you penned a ponder.

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3 posted 2005-02-28 03:45 PM


I'll remember your words Eric.

Dave

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4 posted 2005-02-28 03:52 PM


"By night...we are
less.

Layers of our becoming released
beneath a fingers path."

as it should be...

perfection, again..

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5 posted 2005-02-28 04:00 PM


stunning!
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6 posted 2005-02-28 04:00 PM


By night...we are
LESS.

Layers of our becoming released
beneath a fingers path.


Such creative, turn-about thinking!  Love this, Eric!

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