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The Beauty Of Discovering Always
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The Beauty Of Discovering Always |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I am jealous for you yes, grown indignant with me for the well drawn upon was deep carefully measured sifted shaken down & rethought again toward the intended with lover's arrow aim to woo the unattainable I am hot with anger for you at the weakness of me for I dared peer deep where tears left intangible stains upon stone and always against the grain of our all our souls see? the scars... I, for thirty days flogg in repentance for sins, my personal journey from dark to light, a memorial of ne'er again earnest prayers that my plight shall from your way e'er pass with you, I stand united threefold harmonic tied with you taught me love is choice both sterling and golden precious to those beholding and only fools hurry with out thought to future bury such treasure once a fool... but I've learned your example your strength, tasted & sampled we are integrated together our souls satiated, so taut and finely tuned we are reborn as one ~tier  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
perfection in both mind and soul stunning read |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love it |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
~~AMAZING~~ Tier. Very nice well written piece. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I only wish I could write my heart like this! Truly inspiring! miscellanea |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God, you have read my mind, Tier: I am hot with anger for you at the weakness of me for I dared peer deep where tears left intangible stains upon stone and always against the grain of our all our souls see? the scars... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"but I've learned your example your strength, tasted & sampled we are integrated together our souls satiated, so taut and finely tuned we are reborn as one" Beautiful Tier~I so much enjoy and appreciate your writing. This is extremely beautiful. Heart hugs~Nancy ~ The most beautiful poem ever written.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am hot with anger for you at the weakness of me for I dared peer deep where tears left intangible stains upon stone and always against the grain of our all our souls see? the scars... Your poem is the gentle gauze wrapped around the heartache of it all!!! I wish you didn't have to go Tiersdin, I'm really going to miss reading you. Be well good poetess~ |
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