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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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was the raven's eye on the filcher's wing when the wind was weak and there were no oarsmen to guide the glide when the men of pen put down their swords and let their blood dry inside their veins instead of on the skin of untattood bibles stilled as virgin parchments writhing from mushin's poppy like the hooded serpent eroding walls of satin hollow soughs purloined _______________ dark scribblenote: only the dreams came... [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-28-2005 10:44 AM).] |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Interesting poem. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Indeed. Only the dreams came. Still, they left a poem behind... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
indeed, it showed little or no remorse...and so...once again, you grace us with such beauty, even in the dark...thank you for sharing |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
like the sound and flow of this - reads rather mournful - but I shall have to go to my norse dictionary to really understand what it says   SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dull? Stupid? ohhh Sir I think not; full of emotion and well said....let the dream flow.... luv ya....   ~~*~~ I'm Standing on a bridge I'm waitin in the dark I thought that you'd be here by now Theres nothing but the rain ~~**~~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
nice vision for one's eyes~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you can bring the most stoic to their knees very cool presentation |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write |
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