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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-02-27 08:26 PM


Missing Someone


Like a longing
that can not
be satisfied,
a yearning that
will never be met,
such is the process
of missing someone,
the one you'll
never forget.

JamesLee
Feb23
2005
Suzie

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2005-02-27 08:45 PM


Well done.  Liked how you expressed this James.
TD

D.Lester Young
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2 posted 2005-02-27 10:07 PM


I nice tribute to

""the one you'll never forget"".

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-02-28 10:03 AM


JamesMichael~
This is wistfully sad ... I have known that 'missing' ... and I would imagine that there are times 'Suzie' misses you too~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-02-28 10:05 AM


yes indeed, the one never forgotten..always spiritually loved, of which no one else could come close...a class act, an clone of emotions all wrapped up in a golden bow of tomorrows....
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-02-28 10:48 AM


excatly James...

well done.

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In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2005-02-28 11:40 AM


Yes!

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

sweetpoetess
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7 posted 2005-02-28 11:52 AM


Awesome work as usual.

Poetry is beauty in words.

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2005-02-28 02:44 PM


yeah
MGROVES
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9 posted 2005-03-01 02:21 AM


oh yes~
the missing~
so sad~
good one james


HopeS
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10 posted 2005-03-01 09:58 AM


Ohh yes James , exactly , I know those feelings

Hope

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