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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2005-02-27 06:15 PM



You remain elusive, so far from me,
I fly to the moon through the stars
And back in my caring for you.
Silence is golden…and now I know
Just how hard and unforgiving gold is.
I can’t reach you today.

Neither can I turn my back on you.

These words fall on deaf ears,
But I live on in eternal hope…

Tomorrow…
Maybe tomorrow
My unspoken words will touch you.
Maybe tomorrow
Your heart will feel me again.

Tomorrow is another day.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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miscellanea
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OH
1 posted 2005-02-27 06:17 PM


I don't know for whom this was written, but "today" it touches me.  Very pretty!

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2 posted 2005-02-27 06:24 PM


been on both sides of this

a touching write

ESP
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3 posted 2005-02-27 06:31 PM


Thank you...

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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4 posted 2005-02-27 10:38 PM


oohh...
this touches me, as I am sure you knew it would it's wonderful and so beautifully said Lizzie...well done..

ESP
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5 posted 2005-02-28 11:02 AM


Hey Sea

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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