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0 posted 2005-02-27 04:25 PM


I feel like dancing,
With my love
In the rain,
Beneath the maple tree,
Two crazy people,

Loving love till it ends,
Until then I love you-
And you love me too,
My heart says so-
And so do your eyes,

Your shyness,
And your slickness,
Keeping my fiery heart-
Filled with your beat,
Each breath you take,
And with each wink-
You make me drunk,

And each thought,
Filled with joy,
And I jump,
And you jump with me,
Being silly-
In this rainy weather,
Oh come now love,
Let us stay out of a while,
And let me hold you
A bit longer,
Don’t u feel the beat?
My heart is making…

My love,
Don’t shun away now,
This is where you belong,
In my arms, as I in yours,
Just like Romeo and Juliet,
But our love is greater,
For we can share it today,
And not be afraid.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-27 05:52 PM


Don’t u feel the beat?
My heart is making…

um... ..what's with those strange letters?

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2 posted 2005-02-27 09:30 PM


loverly

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3 posted 2005-03-03 11:41 PM


Nice writing...James
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4 posted 2005-03-04 12:16 PM


"Each breath you take,
And with each wink-
You make me drunk,"

really enjoyed this not much better than dancing in the rain....

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5 posted 2005-03-04 12:31 PM


Another great write by you!

~Alli~

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6 posted 2005-03-04 12:49 PM


The heart is in the writing.
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