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Tiersdin
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east coast

0 posted 2005-02-27 12:06 PM



so many eyes filled with
stars and ponderings of love
who sit enrapt beneath charmed
breath hoping

I enter among them, plain of janes

with no less heart or specialty
but maybe more knowledge, more
seasons touched

my eyes would shed tears anew
aware I am unpretty among
blossoms as fragrant or prized
as these gracing your court

A daisy I am, black-eyed susan
wild and untamed on the fields
outside your piquant fence
but how I bend wence your voice
reaches zephyr sweet 'pon petals
hungering

so many eyes filled with stars
so many souls hoping fullfillment
of written revelations

and I

enter among them...


~tier

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-02-27 12:30 PM


"A daisy I am, black-eyed susan
wild and untamed on the fields
outside your piquant fence
but how I bend wence your voice
reaches zephyr sweet 'pon petals
hungering"

How lovely this is Tier..
with just the right touch of longing..
The daisy is my favourite flower.
Hugs~Nancy

~ The most beautiful poem ever written..
    was written by you in my heart ~

sweetpoetess
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2 posted 2005-02-27 12:32 PM


This is so beautiful.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Susan
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3 posted 2005-02-27 01:05 PM


Oh my - am taken back to my youth here - the longing to be a rose, but am only a daisy - do you know, now, I love daisies - they are joyful and full of spunk -

Loved this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-02-27 06:00 PM


wonderful! yes!
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just out of reach
5 posted 2005-02-27 06:55 PM


another lovely Tiersdin write much enjoyed.
Chris

Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.
~ Javan

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6 posted 2005-02-27 07:06 PM


This is beautiful!

~Alli~

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