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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Even If Even if and even though this walk I take is very slow to accommodate the old with new, I take the walk in distance view. I warm the air with open arms and choice my take, tomorrows' charms. For stained in glass, in solid hold my thoughts oft tend to reach for gold. The treasured of, the merge of "right" the moonspin feel that fills the night. In shadows' come within the haze the bright still shines, the love outweighs. So even if and even though, It's here I speak... my words to know. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I warm the air with open arms and choice my take, tomorrows' charms. For stained in glass, in solid hold my thoughts oft tend to reach for gold Simply lovely - what a good choice - to reach for gold  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
take a bow!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
smiling at the two of you.  thanks M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I just love it when you rhyme!  a lovely uplifting piece here *library* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Dixie, the moon was so beautiful and full last evening as I was driving home that the words were stuck in my head...and I had to write them down and they came out in rhyme. I have little control over that. hugs M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice, Maureen! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Reaching for gold is the only way to go! Good write! |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
you wear out of controll well...a touching,mystic,masterpiece. Live like it's your last day... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Your words a golden treasure Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ I LOVE 'moonspin' ... might just have to take that thought for a poetic ride some indigo eve~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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