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Open Poetry #35

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-02-26 08:36 AM

In these eyes,
I see the hidden in you, the fight
within the shadows
the lack of
behind the waterless tears
and I know more of what you feel
than words can ever say.

In this heart
there is room enough for you,
remnants of life hanging on
knowing there are no simple answers
just a wish
to dance to the light
of the fullest of moons.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-02-26 08:39 AM

I see the hidden in you, the fight

~*~

I want to borrow this line, m'dear..
it's a good one!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-02-26 08:41 AM

Maureen,
Good write, enjoyed the read.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-02-26 08:41 AM

yours any time

my pleasure
hugs
M

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-02-26 08:42 AM

Thank you Sy, good morning to you...wishing I was in a warmer climate if only for a day

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2005-02-28 08:59 AM

"I see the hidden in you, the fight
within the shadows
the lack of
behind the waterless tears"

*nodding* to know someone so well...

Well said.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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