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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2005-02-26 07:37 AM


When dawn takes the night
Rupturing those silent screams
Relieving imagined fright
With a reality improved slightly
Than the nightmare I dream;
It just replaces feelings and sight
Moving from moon to sun beams,
Changing sleep to reality.
Only the blankets hold me
And they quickly fall aside
Only in sleep do they enfold me
Where nightmares and dreams hide.
A cup of coffee calmly does wait
As I wake and walk into my fate.

Gloom


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-02-26 07:42 AM



Good morning, Good Professor.
Now I have a decision between
coffee and tea.

I'll probably ascribe to both
as the day goes by!


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2005-02-26 07:57 AM


Professor,
Your fate you cannot change, but you can surely change the outlook. LOL Have a good morning.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-02-26 08:37 AM


coffee in the morning is always nice to share with someone

it's a morning indeed...after working all night, and I'm tired so that's all I'm reading

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2005-02-26 08:51 AM


You look to the morning...
and I look to the night~~

There are better days ahead...
has to be

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
5 posted 2005-02-28 08:49 AM


"Rupturing those silent screams"

  

outstanding my Gloomy one!!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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6 posted 2005-02-28 08:52 AM


Only the blankets hold me
And they quickly fall aside
Only in sleep do they enfold me
Where nightmares and dreams hide.
A cup of coffee calmly does wait
As I wake and walk into my fate.


Ohhhh sir, I beg to differ, they're are greater forces holding you, then mere blankets...especially one who can write as such...extravagant read...enjoyed this much

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