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marcel
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2005-02-26 01:24 AM

Unspoken

In your eyes I see my reflection
Trapped in the eyes of my soul;
Your beauty most times has me speechless---
So a smile I sometimes offer;
Imperfection bids me to disguise my flaws
By hiding in the shadows of perfection,
But your love shines a light on the truth
Seeing through my nature with your heart and passion,
Guiding me by the hand to the edge of eternity
Where I see in refractions illusion
The many facets of a beautiful man.

Marcel

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2005-02-26 02:44 AM

Quite lovely! I've never understood the magic of this, but I'm glad it happens! Why do certain people draw us out of ourselves when others can't?
(I guess you've answered that here, haven't you?)
A joy to read.

miscellanea

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-02-26 07:44 AM

There...the give and take
of what ever is, unconditionally...

and unspoken.

Excellent work, Keith. Welcome home!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-02-26 08:05 AM

marcel
Well done enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-02-26 08:25 AM

loved this, leaves me with thoughts of
"in these eyes...and what I see"

M

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2005-02-26 09:52 AM

My goodness, you wear this so very well!
Delighted to find and savor this beautiful write Keith. A keeper in every way.
TD

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-02-26 01:01 PM

That ending - perfect! It is oft times in the imperfections that the greatest beauty is found - enjoyed this greatly

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-02-26 05:56 PM

Keith, you do know I'm proud of you, don't you?

excellent piece of poetry! Write on!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2005-02-26 06:50 PM

Very much enjoyed. Chris

Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.
~ Javan

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2005-02-28 11:43 PM

I loved this poem.
TD

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