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Red Robin |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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The scarlet diva along the snow stricken branches infuses life into the still of winter; on this sunless morning, she becomes my missing shadow. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
to highlight only one or two lines is impossible... this entire piece flows perfectly and she reminds you your shadow remains but is just allowing your beauty to shine.....  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmm - very nicely done Inky one - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
exquisite writing, inkgoddess! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and my sister....you smiling here, exceptional write lady very impressive... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
 Solitary robin, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks guys and choshi YES!!! you bless me with this gift of the red diva |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
el gusto es mio......  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I just counted 15 finches in the orange tree, some gold, some purple.....but there's never a robin here, and I do miss them. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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