Midnight Of Blue Becomes Me

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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0 posted 2005-02-25 10:33 AM

Walking along
these drifts of snow,
I am lost        in pristine beauty
and smile at soft recall

      In moonlight of long ago
           we danced,
             two silhouettes embraced
                  in loves shadows.

Frozen in tender touch of love
we were unaware

   of how bitter cold stings,
     and oblivious to passing time.

A hushed sigh escapes,
    unnoticed
          this spill of longing
slips
    into stillness of skies

      darker now, even though
              millions of stars shine brighter.

     This midnight of blue becomes me.

let me dig a lil deeper,
nah, still nothing..
my give a damn is busted....Jodee

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-02-25 10:36 AM

we were unaware
of how bitter cold stings,

~*~

Those are, indeed, the good times.
Beautiful poem, dear...with a tinge of lonely.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-02-25 10:43 AM

I love your inspirations lately

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-02-25 11:34 AM

I just love this, Donna.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-02-25 11:42 AM

Lovely Donna...bittersweet write.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2005-02-25 11:53 AM

... and oblivious to passing time

that's for sure, Donna...

good write!!

hugs
M

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

6 posted 2005-02-25 11:55 AM

Donna, you seemed to be filled with beautiful inspiration these days . . . thanks, thanks, thanks for sharing!

Rf

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-02-25 12:07 PM

the sting of cold
piercing the warm
as you waiver between
the extremes

a hard place to be i know

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

8 posted 2005-02-25 02:36 PM

beautiful, and yes, the midnight of blue does become you

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2005-02-25 02:42 PM

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2005-02-25 02:47 PM

my thanks to you all.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2005-02-25 03:18 PM

a soft ache wrapped in beautiful word ribbons -

lovely -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2005-02-25 04:53 PM

darker now, even though
millions of stars shine brighter.

This midnight of blue becomes me.

Yes it does, but I wish it didn't!
Remember, there's a dream for every star.

I felt you here, Donna~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2005-02-28 08:47 AM

My thanks to each of you!

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