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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-02-25 09:02 AM

"If I could feel your touch
Warm fingertips upon my cheek"(inspired)...

Misunderstood

It's there in words for you to feel
to know the touch, the warmth is real.
Into the wind the wanting knows
upon your cheek, your lips expose
a planted kiss in staying wait
in full moon rise the day's create
silly thoughts imagined clear
to decompose the shadow's fear.
It's I, you know, the one who cares
loving you in words, declare.
A simple rhyme, in symbol thought
a lessening of empty sought.
Would I, if I only could
unmask the real, if understood~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2005-02-25 09:54 AM

understood all too well.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-02-25 09:58 AM

touching write

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2005-02-25 05:22 PM

Beautifully expressed, as always.

Join the club, Maur~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2005-02-26 12:18 PM

“in full moon rise the day's create
silly thoughts imagined clear
to decompose the shadow's fear.”

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Such beautiful writing in your being “Misunderstood”.
JL

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-02-26 09:10 AM

MzWynter~

'the one who cares
loving you in words, declare.'

And ... this is such a lovely thought~

Hoping you are warm and word-cozy this day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-02-26 09:21 AM

Just cold cold and more cold, Marge~~

sure would love some Florida sunshine warmth right now..one storm down yesterday and another on its way tomorrow night.

Pretty soon I will be muscle bound from all the shoveling this season

*s it is a good way to exercise though

hugs and thanks to all
Maureen

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