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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-02-25 07:27 AM


Last Night

I floss and brushed my teeth last night
One never knows what dreams one might
For when I walk the path of wile
I never know my egos guile

And sure enough she waits me there
The women of my minds declare
With winning smile and golden tress
She is the dream I would posses

We often kiss to greet the scene
And sit within a field of green
Hold each other in embrace
And thank the fantasy its grace

And there within my kingdoms soar
We dance within a bubbles core
Ride in chariots laced in shrouds
Of vivid hues of colored clouds

And in the eddy of its course
I find the substance of my source


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-02-25 07:28 AM


And thank the fantasy its grace

~*~

Yes, Sy, a good morning thank you
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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-02-25 07:37 AM


Sunshine
A and a hug back.

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-02-25 08:30 AM


boy, I'd love to see what you'd write if you'd use a water pic...hehe

absolute pleasure...reading this

Thanks Sy and happy Friday

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2005-02-25 08:36 AM


LOL at LeeJ
Another morning gem. There is no limit to you imaginative phrasing
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-02-25 08:37 AM


LeeJ
LOL All my stuff is written with a water pick that flows into the ocean and become
dispersed. Morning sweet

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2005-02-25 08:40 AM


you're the cat's meow
do you know that?
and Lee,that has got to be the pips comment of the day

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-02-25 08:40 AM


Elizabeth  
Sometimes the water wave can smile. Sy

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-02-25 08:43 AM


inkedgoddess
Meow, Meow and thanks for the sip of milk.

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2005-02-25 09:38 AM


a  morning's delight to read~~

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10 posted 2005-02-25 10:01 AM


wonderful read this morning

good to see you

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-02-25 10:20 AM


Maureen,
My delight to see you here.

passing,
Your passing is always a delight.

MGROVES
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12 posted 2005-03-04 03:07 AM


you bring such joy to all of lifes tasks~


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13 posted 2005-03-04 07:44 AM


MGROVES
May joy touch you today.

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