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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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crayons were butterflies with dark wings making angles on the sky there at the edge of a whisper our sky was upside down with a shinny lid held reflectable willing to smile wide the smooth before dawn brought her gloss to make the pink water and amber horizons before the dark of you was more than a pale pondering that pressed my mind between languid mountains imbued by your mist's beguile _______________ dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-25-2005 08:24 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I feel as if I'm watching the artists color the sidewalk lifting it to the sky... you whisper very well. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you draw the breaths between the heartbeats |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine, thank you lady friend for the reads. ___________ ms inky, you are a pleasure in pink and thighs highs, thank you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
crayons were butterflies with dark wings making angles on the sky Reminds me of flying, looking out of the window of the plane...what a sight...and what a write, brought shivers remember the beauty through your words...lovely morning song, thank you |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your work has been highly praised and recommended to me and I understand why. You turn indigo into ruby reflections and dawn into an illuminated rose Thank you for this beautiful read Liz |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lee j.. thanks lady friend you are a pleasure...good morning __________________ ms Liz...thank you kind lady, you smile me with your gracious review |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Beguiling mist will have that effect from time to time... So is it just me, or is there some sub-text to be deciphered in your prose? ;-) Damn. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi... are you reading between the lines and whispering the notions? thank you lady |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 seeing the dark and amber through your eyes....perfect! luv ya-- ~~*~~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Amber spills amongst the dark mists and sighs at the softness - susanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS It is beautiful the way you make color a mood.  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
even darkness can bring out colors~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed~ My spirit will rise |
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